My Vampire System (WN)

I don't need to say much, this is probably one of my favorite novels alongside SS, TBATE, ORV, and The Authors POV. It has elements of all of those books. Great side cast. Warning there are lots of POV switches. This is the 2nd highest rated book on WebNovel(Main light novel site)

The writing is amateurish but the plot and characters are done well. There should be more explanations and too many plot holes. A part after a big battle is hard to get through but I promise the ending is sweet. . . and bitter. I found out halfway that this is not the first book, nor the last. However, they are not closely connected so you can just read this book.

It is interesting enough to make you want to read more after each chapter, but there are points where the side characters and villains are more interesting than the MC, and moments where you may wonder why people who are supposed to be so smart keep doing dumb things. I still find myself loving the characters though, and some of the action scenes really get the blood boiling. I would read about 150 chapters at a time before I would switch to something different for a few days. I'm not sure if this is a real thing, but it's a bit of a "Dilemma Overload" sometimes. It was easier to binge for myself, this way.

Amazing the Dalki war👌🏽great game feeling and family responsability. It could had been better towards the end and I was going to drop it, but since the start of the story I got hooked so decided to finish it for pure curiosity.

Everything is just mess the best way i can explain this novel is this "Sunrise from the North and everything about sun which is true" the author had made such a good novel there is emotion, comedy, struggle, friendship and relationships everything is good but there is no logic and by logic i don't mean by real world one but even when we read fantasy novels even if they are not taking place on earth there is some good principals, rules and logic behind things like there power etc but here author just wrote they appear gives books and vala you become a superhero if it were some basic abilities i could understand but no every type of ability same goes for society, world, technology etc we need to just belive whatever sh*t author pull out from his *ss i have never read any novel who have wasted its potential so much it is good and i can force myself to read it and even enjoy it but whenever i read it and some explanations come it just destroys my immersion in novel after that there will always be a small voice in my head trying to make sence of whatever author never bothered to make

I really, really tried with this one. As review below me said, the writing just makes everything come out flat with this novel. The concept, the world, the powers - they all have a great potential, but the author is hell-bent on not utilizing it and producing the most generic 5/10 story possible. Was hoping it'd get better, but around ch 1000 I noticed myself actively avoiding reading or getting sleepy immediately after I started. Not worth it.

Best system novel ever written 💯 From the learning of, from and through the system to learning to do things without it. The MC is a superb character that might be stupid sometimes but is a lovable one. And the side characters are nothing short of amazing 😍

The concept is ok but everything else is flat the Mc flat the side characters also flat not as flat but still not good the stormy line pretty darn flat it might be good if you’re looking for something to rot your brain on.

This novel was bad. I read it because I felt bad for not giving the werewolf system a chance but I feel like I wasted my time. Quinn is a hypocritical one-dimensional MC. I kept reading just for my curiosity of what would happen and I gave up. I started hating it because of the mediocre writing. The first instance was when Peter was caught after pushing Quinn into the red portal and blurted out to Layla that he did it because of his home issues. I feel like it just came out wrongly. From what I know more should have been put in the conflict and resolution. I kept finding myself cursing at the characters for being stupid. Some things didn't make sense like how vampires who are hiding from human eyes can let humans easily infiltrate their school and only find out later. The relationships as well from the start seem so disingenuous. It has potential but constantly squander it. Thank you for allowing me to vent.

Honest review don't dislike - It's very good novel. . . you can go ahead and read it. It's just that author made it unnecessary long. I mean it already have a ending and a good ending but author was hoping to stretch it and time skipped 1000 years. . . all of his friends are either old or died. It starts to decline after time skip. . . but very good to read , you will enjoy it.