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So it's been a while since I finished it and imma be straight It was Daamn gud and I loved it I could have said I loved every moment of it but that would be a lie since unfortunately Ending felt rushed So let's starts Plot 5/5 Twists 5/5 Character 4. 5/5 Character development 4. 7/5 (Our boi Ren and Angelica (Jin horton as well) Interest 5/5 Arcs- now that's tough Facility Arc 5/5, Gladiator one 4/5 and some more 5/5 arc as well (chose some that don't spoil too much :) ) NO Harem thats a plus point Villains - Ok this is important Some were cool and nice to read while some were just there specially that Everblood and it was really nice but annoying to see him live since he though was problematic his weird antics were the reason story moved to faster pace This is not the best there is BUT it surely is one of the Best there is and by a long shot as well I recommend u read it

2nd novel I’ve finished and honestly it’s a really good introduction into light novels in general. I don’t consider myself a reader but throughout the time I’ve been reading this novel I constantly scroll through my phone to read more. I love the first 600 chapter but then it felt like the author didn’t know what they were doing after. The main cast of characters were not too generic but fun to read and I could see the improvements the author had. The big downside was just the chapters between 724 to 790.

Lack of momentum. Most parts of chapters are about self talking of the characters. It's good for character development, but excess self talking and self-realization ruin the mood.

This was one of my first novels . . I read it before the data on this site got deleted. . it's been long Anyways honest review. . a lengthy start with a lot of explanations. . Amazing power system. . the tactical part and schemes are one of the best. . so overall the middle part is just too f*ck*ng good. . you will get lost at how perfectly everything aligns Now comes the ending. . it's not like i didn't understand it but it felt a lil rushed . . I hope the author made a better endings . . but either way it's still one of my favourites and Ren always will be a top tier mc for me ( Anyone who's gonna hate me. . blud i read this novel when it wasn't even that famous. . i still remember waiting for the last mass release that would have completed this novel . . )

nice novel the start is something as seen a lot in novels but phasing and storytelling is top notch the mc is actually a clever and in line with his character great upto 3/4 of the novel towards the end it becomes shakky and makes people unable to continue but it has its own charm.

The storyline was good, and I loved the characters. It’s just that I feel the author explained way too much and repetitively at that. Most cases the explanations and thoughts of the characters made the momentum of exciting scenes drop. The typos are also too distracting, I wish the author proofread. I actually only continued reading because I was invested in the story and characters. The ending was also rushed. I wished that we knew more, not only about the akashic laws, but also about what happened to the characters since we journeyed with them through their struggles for over 800 chapters.

Had potential but most characters are poorly written and the ending was a huge letdown. If you want some generic system copy pasta brain rot this is for you. Understandably this is the authors first novel but if you value you pacing well written characters and a unique story this isn't for you

Very good novel. Personally would suggest a minimum read of 100 chapters to see if you like it, then choose whether or not to continue. All i have to say is that theres a reason people like this novel. Sure, the last 70 or so chapters become kinda bad but all the other ones are great and the ending is very well made. A memorable book. (Of course this is all subjective and you may severely dislike the book and what not but you should at least try 100 chapters).

I'll brief brief I gave this novel a 8/10 simply because the ending felt rushed and weak otherwise it would've have been an easy 9/10 . The story had some plot holes here and there mainly in the final part of the novel but it didn't impact the novel that much except like I said in the final part where it was a bit chaotic if I'm being honest. Otherwise the story was overall very good the characters each had different personalities and uniqueness to them which we could feel that the author did put alot of love and work in his very first novel. The best think I could attribute to this novel is whitout a doubt it's plotwists being real with you i feel like I've never been this much surprised by reading a novel since I've began reading novel just to put it in perspective I sometime was left bewildered by plotwists for days thinking about them. Also I've felt many emotions reading this novel mainly grief, sadness, happiness , and laughing (a big contrast if you ask me). Overall I would recommend.

Seriously, I don't understand why this novel has rating of 4. 6. Bad storytelling, bad character development, meeh villains. I've completed 300+ chapters and still can't find a single reason to continue this.